So, I've decided to just put the first chapter of this AU InuYasha fan fiction I wrote on my journal. I've written fic before, just nothing anyone can read. I'm not brave enough to put it up on ff.net, and this fells like less pressure. I felt a little pushed to put this somewhere where people could see it by my friend, Sarah. I don't care what comments you give me, say it sucks, say it's totally awesome, just say something. I'm not going to write anymore if people don't like this, though. I'm not a writer, so I'm not going to see the point if others aren't going to push me for more, if I'm being honest. It has no title, right now. If anyone thinks of one, shout it out.

 

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So I finally saw Twilight. I watched online of course, that the Lord for bootleggers, because lord knows I wasn't going to pay for that shit. Alright so, here's my review, I guess.
So I did a video review here with my cousin, it's in two parts, we had a lot to say.
www.youtube.com/watch
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Alright, but I think I'll type a version. I guess I'll start out with the good, go into the neutral and stuff that I think was a bit off, then to the bad.

With the books being a travesty to all literature ever, the movie really had no where to go but up, and up it did. The movie I think was at least three times better then the book for a few very important reasons.
Bella is the first and most noticeable. I wrote in my commentary months ago that I wondered how they would play Bella to make an audience root for her and not just see her as the awful bitch she really is. The writers managed to make her into a decent person. When she gets the car from her Dad, she’s happy about it. She doesn’t call it “the thing” and complain about it, like she does everything. Movie Bella doesn’t complain about anything as I remember.
She doesn’t manipulate Jacob and lead him on in the movie like in the book. There’s a scene with Jacob and Bella as the movie starts out that establishes them as childhood friends, verse in the books where Jacob and Bella barely knew each other from their past. I liked Jacob too; he seems like the sweet kid he’s supposed to be, before his character was completely destroyed.
She seems to actually care about her father. They eat together at that dinner I think at least three times, so that’s good. When he loses his friend, she puts her hand on his shoulder and says she’s sorry, and looks like she means it! I enjoyed Charlie, by the way. And him and Billy together where the best bits of the movie.

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